For this one I was supposed to show emotion in a scene not tell you what he is feeling.
For example:
Telling-- He was angry.
Showing-- (3rd Person) his ears and neck burned as he clenched his fists and jaw in anger.
(1st Person) A terrible ringing noise filled my ears, and a hot tingling sensation shot across my face. I am so angry I feel like punching the wall and screaming, but I don't. I just stand silent faking a sweet happy smile, but inside I'm fuming.
Emotion is important so don't let it fall flat.
Day 44 Completed.
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